Sela Locke

Okay, before anything else, thank you for reviewing! No one seems to enjoy my stories enough to give advice, at least not often. :( Quiet and still.... hmmm. I honestly ...

I already told you, in this kind of story, it GETS background, only, it comes slowly. I only know of a few damn good writers that can make you understand ...

I’m aloud to go here. Oops! I think you mean allowed. Must've been tired, eh? There were other mistakes, but if anyone ever gets around to reviewing besides me, I'm ...

Thankies, Smi. Hey, without you guys, it would still be... bleh. :D -Sela Yes, yes, more critic-ness! ^^

Well, frank you vurry mooch. Yuss, me needies tuh fixeth thut. Otherwise, anyfing? I mean, well.... Yeah, you need to re-review my other two parts, now that I've edited them. ...

Okay, it's edited. I need opinions, opinions!! Also, please read the first part first, and not the next part. It's confusing if you don't, so just... do! ^^

Excuse me? .... thank you! Blatantly? no asses are going anywhere unless I say so, 'stood? Besides, it's not my room, 'tis our room, yours, mine, and that other annoying ...

Whoa! Overload on 'familar' You sure wanna drive the point home that she's not where she should be. 'Toto i don't think we're in Kansas anymore.' Rather simple, but tell ...

Ooh, thanks Smi! Yups, this could use some work. I wrote it something like a year ago, and then fixed it up a tad in... December? Or was it January? ...

Yeah, this was just a random thingamabobber. I'm writing an actual story, it's called 'Ancient Lies' right now it's in Action/Adventure, but someone might move it. Maybe not, though. xD ...

-Very deep voice- I will, Nan, I will. Okay, definitely not the nation. Maybe, the backyard? Yes, I'll look through it. SAYLUHH. P.S. Oh, wait. Dibbun, not dibbin. Also, Joyan/Kayo ...

Oops, someone will probably move it to fantasy. -makes face- It's set in the real world, but considering there are two walking, (on two feet) talking animals, I suppose it ...

Oh, okay. I sort of pictured a government official as cruel, but mature. But, obviously, it's your story. ^^

Ooh, here's the thing, Ink. (Can I call you that?) See, he actually only has a slight Aussie accent, but I missed that when I edited. But I still fixed ...

Thanks! Yes, I'll look it over. ^^